Cleverlobe's Reviews

[Hanged Man's Elegy]

I knew that scarf had issues.

Only one word needs to be said here: Get this man a job in the animation industry!

[Raiden's Crossover]

You click now.

I laughed my ass off! You made me wipe a tear or two. Damn!

[1: The Origin of Kale Urn]

About that voice...

What's with the narrator??? It sounds like he never got laid, or maybe he did but his girlfriend certainly commited suicide after their first night together. I kept thinking about this guy being a porn star. Aside from that the story was interesting and the artwork was decent, even tho the narrator was entertaining for all the wrong reasons. Well good luck with the next one.

Kale-Urn responds:

Excuse me, i would appreciate if you could be civilised enough to actually give me some constructive criticism, and leave the bashings aside.

Don't put your life frustrations onto me buddy. Your post said a lot about you, and I pity you for being so childish.

People like you make me not want to come back here and sumbit more work. Jerk.

[Ode To Angels (Renewed)]

Nice!

Liked the piano, not too crazy about the synth. It didn't fit with the natural sounding piano. Orchestral strings would've been a better choice to support the piano. But the composition and arrangement is ace.

MilkMan-Dan responds:

I couldn't agree more... I was iffy about the synth and now I regret it a lil... unfortunitley this blasted keyboard is limited in it's strings selection. I wish I knew how to use those cool new programs lol. Oh well... at least it's good and raw :)